After all these years
it all comes to a finale
and I say, ‘Thank you.’
By the Book (sic)
By the Book (sic)
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Graeme Sandford 
for what?
Lots of hours of drama – over 36 years!
You could always switch to dancing. You would do well as a ballerina.
Have you ever seen an elephant in a tutu?
Um… not lately.
We must move in different shaped circles. G:)
Thank you for your help with the prompt for this, Chrissy. G:)
Different shaped circles
We must move
in different shaped circles,
you and I.
Not that a circle could be a circle
if it were of another shape.
.
Out paths never cross,
it is as if we
are travelling equidistantly
in the same direction
and at the same velocity
upon the same Möbius strip
for eternity.
LOL! Love it!
Thank you, Chrissy, I hope you don’t mind my comment on your words – not everybody appreciates a well-meaning comment. And, as the piece was from your book..
I do try to offer a reasonable comment, not a criticism.
Hope all is well with you.
Grae:)
Nah. I published that book back in 2010. We all learn and grow in our writing. There’s probably a lot more I could have written better.
Phew! Thank you. Occasionally you can upset people by pointing out errors or suggesting things. It put me off commenting for a long time. G:)
I understand. There’s someone I follow on WordPress who occasionally point out a silly error like their and there, or when someone obviously hits the “K” key instead of the “L” when they write beautiful. 🙂 How embarrassing. But, I never went to high school more than a few months so I expect mistakes in my writing. The comma and apostrophe are my worst enemies. LOL!
I’m all okay with anybody pointing out my errors – and I make a few – nobody does, and I have found them later on when going over old poems myself. Our precious words. G:)
The thing is, to my mind, that you have a lovely poem that just needed a slight tweak to give it what it needed to be even more lovely. Than I worried that I had commented upon it. Hey Ho.
Have a great day. G:)