#NaPoWriMo – Day 8: The Badriomaku

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Today’ Badriomaku

Today
Is the day
When it all stops here.
STOP!
And then continues
Upon its way;
Off to pay its dues.

‘My Love’ Badriomaku

My love

is precious

and I love her so

much!

she is my daylight

and my nighttime;

and we are as one.

 

 

With a syllable count of 2-3-5-1-5-4-5, the Hungarian Badriomaku is interesting in that it gives you a structure that doesn’t fit any preconceived ideas. Below is another example.

 

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4 responses to “#NaPoWriMo – Day 8: The Badriomaku

  1. too tricky..you did a great job under such heavy restraint

  2. these are super. new form for me.I’ll have to give it a try

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