Tall and free
Fallen tree
Came down to earth
With a bump, you see
One minute fine
The next one arrived
Russian Roulette
Which trees survived
From sideways on
The forest seems changed somehow
What was then
Just isn’t now.
Tall and free
Fallen tree
Came down to earth
With a bump, you see
One minute fine
The next one arrived
Russian Roulette
Which trees survived
From sideways on
The forest seems changed somehow
What was then
Just isn’t now.
There’s a truth here.
There often is – thank you for reading and commenting. G:)
I especially like the rhythm in this.
Thank you – I shall go and check it out – may be just lucky if I gave it rhythm. G:)
I could be wrong, since I’m new to your writing–but I detect a “natural” rhythm, subtle, an easy flow in more than one poem; it’s very nice to read.